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Wish I Can
Contributed by
maria_mendonez_ibardolas
on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Wish I can
Wish I could
Change this world
For a better place for all
A world in my own imagination
With love and peace
To take away the sorrow
In everyone’s heart
Hatred, war and sufferings would not exists
If people of all nations can come together for one purpose in life
To love and care for each other
I know that I cannot change the world
But maybe I can make a difference
With understanding and compassion
To anyone’s I come across
That love will spread
To everyone I come to know
And within them it goes around
To all the people around the world
And love will grow to everyone’s heart
Then there will be peace
No more hatred, sufferings or war
Only a better place
To live in love with god
Spirit and soul will be light
If we have the love in our hearts
To everyone we come across
Where money cannot buy
Don’t you think we ought to stop
For one moment in our life
To think deep in thoughts and in our hearts
That we can make a difference
For everyone of us
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2002-12-05 16:20:00]
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Re: Wish I Can
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 10:19:35 PM AEST
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| Yes it's simply PAY IT FORWARD!!!! Do three nice things to someone & they have to do three nice things back,to three others! I liked this this poem reminded me of that movie! Good one! Christina |
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Re: Wish I Can
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by Cathie on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 08:28:08 PM AEST
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| Nice job! Enjoyed every bit of it. Just one little thing though, you forgot to capitalize God. Other then that, excellent work. |
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