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Darkness of her Heart
Contributed by
desperatesoul
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 04:41:43 AM in AEST
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Darkness of her Heart
7/2004
Falling forever,
never ending
it seems,
trying to
awaken from
nightmare dreams,...
Giving up all hope
while
clinching your
chest,
but still trying
not to let
your
soul rest,
clinging to
Life
while your
fingernails
break,
That's when
your
Enemies
choose
this time
to Awake,
Im
Screaming
out at the
White Light
above,
Then
into the
Darkness
flies A
Beautiful
Dove,
but she to
is
Consumed
and must
quickly
Depart,
For
nothing
can save you
from
The Darkness of her Heart.........................
by:ss_byrd $av $aucI~
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desperatesoul
... [
2005-01-16 04:41:43]
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 04:55:43 AM AEST
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A bit sad but an awesome write. Shows much wisdom.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by bluebird on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:33:16 AM AEST
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"clinging to
Life
while your
fingernails
break,
That's when
your
Enemies
choose
this time
to Awake"
that was my fav bit.speaks the truth,enemies always attack when ur not strong,shows how weak they are tho.
Awesome write.
~keep the faith~
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by EverlastingDawn on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:34:57 AM AEST
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| It's quite sad, but nevertheless a good poem. Great Write. |
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by sean88 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:24:35 AM AEST
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Very sad write! But it's well writen.
sean xxx |
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:21:06 AM AEST
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Wow !! Very impressive!!
Good flow and rhyme scheme. |
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 01:15:31 AM AEST
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love the flow of this
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