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Wish I Could Take It Back
Contributed by
Kuro_Mirai
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:18:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I wish I could take back what I said
I didn't mean to make you feel mislead
I should have said it differently
I wish I could make it more friendly
I didn't want to make you mad
Your expression ended up making me sad
Now I'm at the brink of tears
Now I'm in a fit of fear
I made a terrible mistake
My fear feels like it will soon outbreak
Will you still be my friend?
What I said wasn't meant to offend
I don't want to lose someone like you
We have been friends forever
You know that it's true
You and I were so clever when we were together
I have said stupid things like when I would boast
But this one thing really hurts the most
I wish I could take it all back
But now you, my friend, have turned your back
I wish we would smile and laugh
Like it was a joke, but even I can do this math
I just lost my best buddy
This would never be funny
I look down beginning to cry
Who knew a friendship like ours would die?
I didn't see it coming
I wish I could take it all back
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Kuro_Mirai
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Re: Wish I Could Take It Back
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by Kellros on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:22:36 AM AEST
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Its sad to hear this, this made me think of something they said in equilibrium.
"I am a poor man, all i have are my dreams. I lay my dreams underneath your feet, tread carefully, because you tread on my dreams." |
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Re: Wish I Could Take It Back
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by mia on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:48:23 AM AEST
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| Nice poem, i loved it |
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Re: Wish I Could Take It Back
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 05:15:06 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
A friend that can't forgive then ya don't need around.
I do know the felling tho. We all say things we don't mean. don't be so hard on yourself.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Wish I Could Take It Back
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:10:54 AM AEST
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I see some foreced ryming on the poem, but sometimes that cant be helped. I did however enjoy this write. Thanks for posting.
Jane x |
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Re: Wish I Could Take It Back
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by dreaming-of-your-love on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:51:55 AM AEST
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i love it it sounds just what happen to me and my friend
dreaming-of-your- love |
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Re: Wish I Could Take It Back
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by sean88 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:20:55 AM AEST
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Really nice poem! Hope you get your friend back.
sean xxx |
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Re: Wish I Could Take It Back
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:48:56 AM AEST
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| another excellent write, though you need to work on not forcing rhymes as much. |
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Re: Wish I Could Take It Back
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:10:13 PM AEST
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| Great job!!!! |
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