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BLACK........is grief
Contributed by
mia
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 01:55:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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If i could say one thing to you, it would be i love you
If i could turn back the hands of time I would so you could be here with me today.
I would give anything for you to hold me in your arms again & say 'i love you sis'
I need your brother love, support & life
Where did you go?
Why did you leave me alone?
Was it to look after me from above.
Tell me why i need to know
I remember our memorys, never forgotten
I remember the last time we saw each other
18 to young to die
15 to young to loose a brother
To young for any death
I would just love to hear your voice
Copyright ©
mia
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2005-01-16 01:55:09]
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Re: BLACK........is grief
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:23:13 AM AEST
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| This poem is great. I wish I could say something to make you feel better, so, I bet your brother is in heaven, and wishing for you to feel better. I really like your poem, it really made me think. |
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Re: BLACK........is grief
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:59:09 AM AEST
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This is heart wrenchingly sad but beautifully written.
I'm so sorry for your loss but every time u think of him he's right there with u watching over you and wanting u to be happy.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs, prayer,
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Re: BLACK........is grief
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by julieh on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:24:02 AM AEST
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This is so sad and the pain in your heart will be felt by all who reads it.take care ju
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