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bruises on my jaw
Contributed by
renstar
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 12:54:25 AM in AEST
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bruises on my jaw
pain in my heart
you say you have nothing
you cant help tearing us apart
why do i love you
im sure i will never know
but ill probably still be with you
till old do i grow
its happened before it will happen again
you are a physco
and my life you will destroy
but you are my life partener
with or with out the joy
i know your life it was rough
and i know you try to be tough
but you are slowly killing me
and your words are poisioning me
and im losing all sense of reality
why do i chose this life
why do i help you hurt me
im feeling a little lost
but i stay why? and at what cost?
these questions i know ill never hear the answers
i will continue to be suffocated by your demanding ways
and i will always love you and hate you till my dieing days
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renstar
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Re: bruises on my jaw
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by psychofemale on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 01:18:41 AM AEST
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| i really wouldn't know what to do in ur situtaion, but good poem. |
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Re: bruises on my jaw
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by mia on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:02:27 AM AEST
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All i have to say, its great poem, good on ya!!!!
hugs & more hugs
mia |
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Re: bruises on my jaw
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by bluebird on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:13:26 AM AEST
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this is a great poem!!
I like the last line the best.
~keep the faith~
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Re: bruises on my jaw
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by Kellros on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:38:27 AM AEST
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| Seems like a broken clock, to scared to leave to afraid to stay. But... people can change, its impossible to change someone, you can only change yourself. If you work on it together you could fix the broken clock. |
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Re: bruises on my jaw
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by Tru2Myself on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:08:25 AM AEST
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I totally LOVE the last line. Good poem!
Lauren |
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