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Lost In The Streets Of Tokyo
Contributed by
Kuro_Mirai
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 12:06:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The uncertain figure walked down the street
She didn't care of the people she'd meet
Everyone she spoke to didn't care
She didn't know what they said when she asked "where?"
The true city of lights
Glowed bright in the night
The city of lights wasn't right
The city with no grass
Everything seemed like glass
Could be broken if put under pressure
She lived nowhere
She knew this place was unfair
Losing her place everywhere she went
Never knew what those signs meant
So she strolled down this road
Nothing she seemed to know
When lost in the streets of Tokyo
Copyright ©
Kuro_Mirai
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2005-01-16 00:06:01]
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Re: Lost In The Streets Of Tokyo
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by EverlastingDawn on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:50:33 AM AEST
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| Great write. The similies, and imagery are amazing. Good poem. |
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Re: Lost In The Streets Of Tokyo
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:22:59 PM AEST
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| Hi, Kuro-San! It's Moshi Moshi! Great poem. It was very interesting. Liked it a lot. |
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Re: Lost In The Streets Of Tokyo
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:04:10 PM AEST
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| First of all, welcome to YPDC. This would be very confusing. I liked the write. Keep on penning. *S* Cynthia |
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