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With You
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
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Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 11:55:36 PM in AEST
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With you,I was almost happy
Now I sit here once again feeling crappy
With you,Forgetting About the Past
But me and you didnt last
With you,Forgetting everything that made me mad
I mope around everywhere feeling sad
But your gone and Im the one to blame
I still wanna be with you but I feel the shame
Everything we were
Is now just a blur
In my mind memories of you I cannot find
Copyright ©
sick_n_twisted
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2005-01-15 23:55:36]
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Re: With You
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 12:09:02 AM AEST
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| powerful and emotional. you can be happy without them also. |
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Re: With You
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 12:12:30 AM AEST
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| I like it. It's very emotional and sad. Putting it simply, It's great. |
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Re: With You
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by wetnwild on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 04:42:09 AM AEST
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| it's short, but well writen! |
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Re: With You
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by dreaming-of-your-love on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:54:22 AM AEST
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awww sorry! i love it
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Re: With You
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by sean88 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:36:51 AM AEST
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Aww we have all dealt with similar issues so you are not alone! Hope you feel better soon :). Lovely peom aswell!!
sean xxx |
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