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Cutt
Contributed by
humboldtsweetie33
on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:08:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Just one cut
but I feel no pain
so instead i cut again
I watch the blood fall on the floor
sag my shoulders,
then cut some more
my skin so white
now full of red
on my clothes and on the bed
nineteen cuts, soon fifty-one
you think thats too much
well I'm not done
you don't know half the **** I'm in
or why I drag the blade across my skin
as I slit my wrists
I sit and cry
all these cuts will bleed me dry
the final cut I have to make
I'll still be bleeding when I wake
cut the vein and then to bed
in the morning I'll be dead
lifes a *****
and then you die
so screw this world and don't ask why
Copyright ©
humboldtsweetie33
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2005-01-15 22:08:57]
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Re: Cutt
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:12:20 PM AEST
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| pretty poweful write that conveys a lot of anger towards life, I enjoyed reading this, good job. Hope this is just writin though and you won't really do it... |
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Re: Cutt
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:12:47 PM AEST
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Sad, but I enjoyed reading it.
Good work. |
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Re: Cutt
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 12:23:31 AM AEST
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| Really enjoying poem, Great rythem and its so very true. I Know people that actually do this (Im hoping you dont) and this is so very nearing how they feel. I love someone that does yet I still cant do anything about it. |
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Re: Cutt
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:04:57 PM AEST
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holy crap this poem was totally awesome I really really really liked it.. is it ok if I print it out and add it to my fave book of Poem's???
w/luv 4lyfe
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