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Ruminative
Contributed by
stalkee
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Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:59:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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"Ruminative"
In the dark, my words are stark
As I sit in this chilly park
and I think of you
The clouds remove the moon from the night
While the glass falls from above
And the light vanishes from my eyes
While the glass falls hard
Sitting 'round, my words are drowned
And my eyes fall to the ground
as I think of you
All the clouds, they fall upon me
All the clouds, they crawl upon me
All the clouds, they seep into me
All the clouds, they wreak havoc in me
In the dark, my words are stark
As I sit in this chilly park
and I think of you
Sitting 'round, my words are drowned
And my eyes fall to the ground
as I think of you
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stalkee
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2005-01-15 21:59:54]
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Re: Ruminative
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:03:47 PM AEST
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"Sitting 'round, my words are drowned
And my eyes fall to the ground
as I think of you"
My favorite bit.
I really enjoyed this write.
Good job. |
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Re: Ruminative
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:25:14 PM AEST
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| i agree with marisa. you have great potential as a writer. |
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Re: Ruminative
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:47:07 PM AEST
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awww... this captures the feelings of longing and loneliness.... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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