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Wasted Dreams
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:25:33 PM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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Wasted Dreams
The blood drips down
Not touching the ground
The blood drips down
Without a reason found
The tears stream
In a saddened gleam
The tears stream
From what you've become to be
The blood drips down
The tears stream
While you drown
In the sound
Of the unheard screams
And wasted dreams
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2005-01-15 21:25:33]
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Re: Wasted Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:27:57 PM AEST
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| Wow...great write! |
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Re: Wasted Dreams
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:48:38 PM AEST
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| woah....that was awesome, I'm not sure what it was...but this made somethin hit me...great job |
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Re: Wasted Dreams
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:57:56 PM AEST
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| Oh my god this is amazing Jennifer..Superb. |
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Re: Wasted Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:46:47 PM AEST
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Beautifully dark
"While you drown
In the sound
Of the unheard screams
And wasted dreams",sent chills over me.awesome |
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