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Fear of Living
Contributed by
absentangel69
on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 05:37:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I trace your love
With my fingertips
A roadmap
Of past sorrows
How can you pick up
All the broken peices
Put them back together
For me
I see the hate
In the lines
I kiss a broken soul
With my heartless eyes
Taste your life
Eat your dreams
I am broke
I am the seed
That builds into your brain
The light that burns
My way into you
To make a freind
To tell a lie
Keep me here to struggle
Fear of life
Copyright ©
absentangel69
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2005-01-15 17:37:10]
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Re: Fear of Living
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 06:02:23 PM AEST
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| nice poem ,so true and sad. |
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Re: Fear of Living
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 07:07:02 PM AEST
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| This makes alot of sense. Good job. |
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Re: Fear of Living
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:33:45 PM AEST
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Yeah this one makes a lot of sense... u're a good writer... keep it up!
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Re: Fear of Living
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by Rottenrioter on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:58:17 PM AEST
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| this is one of few i actually like...keep up the good writing |
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Re: Fear of Living
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by Sheveg on
Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 12:00:36 PM AEST
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It sounds like you were hurting when you wrote this.
Sherry |
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