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Better of dead
Contributed by
lostinside
on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 03:16:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She never known her father
Her mother didn’t care
Everyone she knew
Acted like she wasn’t there
She wondered why she was
In this world, all alone
Nothing to grab
Nothing to hold on
She needed support
To go on with living
To put away her fears
And stop shivering
But no one gave her
What she wanted most
A shoulder to lean on
And something went wrong
And let this be
The last thing she said
‘You couldn’t help me
I’m better of dead’
Copyright ©
lostinside
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2005-01-15 15:16:02]
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Re: Better of dead
(User Rating: 1 )
by BabyFacedAngel2010 on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 05:08:27 PM AEST
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WOW I feel that way everyday!!!! I cant belive how much that relates to me! well please read some of my poems if you will...
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Re: Better of dead
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:54:26 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem..its awome how u can take someone elses sitiation and put it in words
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Re: Better of dead
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by Deablo on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:22:05 PM AEST
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| good poem really good.. gets the point across |
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