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Hiroshima
Contributed by
darkeyedman
on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Dark, heavy clouds fill the valleys.
Stark, burnt, limbless trees
peek above the smokey gray.
I put my long black coat
over my uniform as the
wretched screams of ghosts,
not yet awakened to death,
cut thru the fog.
Distant and mournful cries
for loves lost and children gone.
Memories etched by light,
shadows cast in white.
Survivors, unlucky and alone,
walk through the waste of what was.
Life passes, death consumes,
spirits rise to look.
Memories, flashing like knives
in the hands of the sun,
kneel them down begging,
begging for the end to come.
Mortals, lost and clueless,
sliding down one ribbon of time.
dancing with the inevitable.
Copyright ©
darkeyedman
... [
2002-12-05 13:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hiroshima
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 01:56:00 PM AEST
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| a wonderful use of laungage...i could totally see the images. Good job. |
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Re: Hiroshima
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by jonteD on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 03:38:57 PM AEST
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| Good work |
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Re: Hiroshima
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 08:04:24 AM AEST
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| This is an awesome description of that horrible tradegy. Great work!!!! |
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