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Whisper Your Name
Contributed by
Lee
on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:23:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Languidly moving
From side to side
I see where my fellow mind
Does take its place
In the moon to abide
You made a change
Once you were my main
Squeeze, but you won't
Let me even hold your hand
Anymore
You were once
My glittering comfort
My shade in the sun
My shelter in the rain
Now you won't even let me
Whisper your name
Whisper your name
At the creekbed
Where I can't raise my head
To see you
To see you
To see you
Tell me
Is this the last
I've seen of you?
I hear what you say,
But it doesn't seem to be true
Because I know
That you are going to stick around
Deep down
Inside,
And I'll still whisper like a clown
When you've cried
Copyright ©
Lee
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2005-01-15 08:23:49]
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Re: Whisper Your Name
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by arden on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:32:14 AM AEST
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Beautiful lee.
It felt wistful and romantic and yet a bit sad.
Nicely written and good rhyme.
I’m rather impressed.
Loved this.
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Re: Whisper Your Name
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by bluebird on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:47:50 AM AEST
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i could actually hear this as a song..
Im not a romantic kinda person,but this was good.
~keepthefaith~
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