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Dancer
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
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Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:08:23 AM in AEST
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She is a dancer
Her moves catch my eye
I'll move around behind her
Silently, I hear her cry
A whispered vow
She begs release
But for now
Her face stays straight
I stand and wait.
She twists around
Her dance is wild
I grab her wrists
And move to the sound
There is a tear in the corner
Of her beautiful eyes.
I tell her I will free her
If she serves me for life.
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assassinatorgirl
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2005-01-15 08:08:23]
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Re: Dancer
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by bluebird on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:45:26 AM AEST
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this is very weird,i dont know why but for sum reason i like it.
~keepthefaith~
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Re: Dancer
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by visualizing_life on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:02:24 PM AEST
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i LOVE it!!!! im a dancer it reminds me of me...its awesome ur a good writer dont give up ur good
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Re: Dancer
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:16:52 PM AEST
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Beautifully written and sweet.
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