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Graveside
Contributed by
thespiritx
on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She was 19 and beautiful.
A daughter untainted.
With everything to live for.
She hid her emotions
From all.
Deep inside she hurt.
They saw her at school.
She was always cheery and smiling.
The guys thought she was cute.
It tore at her soul,
That unknown pain
She never showed.
She went to church.
The congregation loved her.
She was an excellent singer.
Yet the agony and despair
Never left.
They haunted her even there.
She graduated high school.
Even thought about college.
She is not there now.
The sadness developed
Into torturous thoughts.
It consumed her.
Alone in her room,
She wept for herself.
She wept for her life.
Ravaged and torn
She was in her mind.
She knew it was time.
To her father
She bid goodbye
With a note of love.
To her mother
She bid farewell
With a note of love.
To her brother, only 14,
She bid him joy
And happiness eternal.
To Crystal, her "friend for life,"
She bid much luck
With a bracelet once received.
To the world, however,
She expressed anger.
She expressed hate.
She expressed pain, grief and sadness.
She despised the world.
Erin had beauty.
She had popularity and friends.
Erin had life,
And for that, we love her.
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thespiritx
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2002-12-05 11:30:00]
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Re: Graveside
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 12:19:05 PM AEST
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| very powerful, nicely done |
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Re: Graveside
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 01:56:46 PM AEST
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| Emotional! |
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Re: Graveside
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 05:43:15 PM AEST
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Spiritx, even tho this is very sad, it is very, very beautiful... You sure have a way with words... You have got yourself a new fan here...
Jenni |
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Re: Graveside
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 02:13:37 AM AEST
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Excellent conveying of what a true depressed person goes through. Gut wrenching and beautiful at the same time. How interesting the love she has for her family, even as she loathes the world that drives her to death. Deep meaning and feeling are here.
(Thank you for the welcome, by the way :)) |
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Re: Graveside
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by AngryPrincess on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:20:36 PM AEST
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i cried! thank you, its so sad...
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Re: Graveside
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:58:02 PM AEST
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| beautifully sad, hugs n' love nessa |
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