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Contributed by
o7neves
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Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:15:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your beauty and mind
So pure and innocent
Your age and face
So young and fresh
Your emotions and actions
So genuine and honest
Your personality and imagination
So fun and vivid
Your heart and eyes
So warm and big
You in its entirety
So special and perfect
Putting you on a pedestal
And me way beneath you
Now that I think of it
You’re too good for me
And I’m not good enough for you
Copyright ©
o7neves
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2005-01-15 01:15:15]
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Re: Your...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:18:12 AM AEST
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| I actually think this is an excellent write. It's short, but you go straight to the point and praise this person's wonderful qualities. This is a very good poem, and don't ever feel as though you're not good enough for someone. :-) |
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by CurtisC on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:34:12 AM AEST
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i actually think that it reads very well, and gets your point across well. And going along with what marisa said don't ever feel that way about yourself, good write though.
Curtis |
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 03:47:28 AM AEST
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That was really nice, you got your beautiful message across. Good write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:53:23 AM AEST
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| Nice write. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Your...
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by prozac_memory on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:36:45 AM AEST
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a great poem
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 05:58:48 PM AEST
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nicely written ur point comes across.
thanks 4 sharing |
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Re: Your...
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by Dec2three198five on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:49:01 PM AEST
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| This describes the situation with me and annabel perfectly doesn't it? lol. 33 |
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