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Twist....
Contributed by
Sonibe
on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Many things happens
in the crack of my wrist,
These are a few things
that I would call twist.
Nothing hardly goes right
and that makes me feel poor,
I'm getting confused because
I don't know whats going on any more.
My mind goes crazy
and I feel like I want to die,
Then my friends appear
and cheer me up for "who knows why."
There are many more things
to add to my long list,
Of things that make
my life seem "twist."
Copyright ©
Sonibe
... [
2002-12-05 11:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Twist....
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 11:07:31 AM AEST (User
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I enjoyed this one alot...it almost sounds like my life lol..thanks for sharing this one...Keep em' coming..and by the way welcome to YPDC...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: Twist....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniel on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 02:23:41 PM AEST (User
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this sounds WAY too familiar. really who knows why? i sure don't but, but at least you could express it here. good to read this. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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