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Dismal abundance

Contributed by babygurl16 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:45:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Soaring through the passionate sky,nothing I've ever seen before.Colors that I can't describe wanting to stay forevermore.Deeply broken through all my dreams and the passions of my life.When I'm dreaming please don't wake me,save me from my strife.Burning bolts of vigorous fire bursts throughout my mind.Neverending confusion,walking the endless line.I want to go home but nobody's there,empty as my conscience seems.Feels like I'm all alone pleading to break free.Chained down to the floor,light the match and walk away.It won't sting apparently hoping as I pray.Shut out all the world,can't hold onto it anymore.Just let go and don't bestow my broken heart that they've torn.Dark,evil,and proud can't help the way I am.My vains are pumping but my life is in a jam.So afraid to close my eyes,so scared that I won't wake.I'm not under the influence of you.Your follow I won't take.Your expectations are high,my life is a complete lie.What path should I take?It's so hard to forsake.I realize that my heart is cold and my body is growing numb.I'm so upset with myself because look how far I've come.I need to breathe so give me room.I'm not what you think so don't assume.Nobody feels what I feel.Nobody cares I'm not real.I'm fake,I'm living my life so you cant recreate.Smiling on the outside but something else on the in.Dark,cold,leaning n expectational sin.Eyes wide shut,don't you want to know me the way I really am?Here I come ready or not I don't need you to hold my hand.Precious eminent mist pumps through all my vains.Devious hate stains my heart again.Slit my wrists bleed me over and over again.I will not submit to your foolish ways of calling you a friend.I lie hear all alone dreaming of thoughts surpassed.Reasoning in my world of chaos while it carelessly lasts.Loveing nothing,feeling empty,this torture will forever endure.Distant pleasures of the earth seeing everything impure.What am I looking for?The past or the present?What am I dwelling on?Shame I whisper to myself as the emotions become unbearable.~~~rachael

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Re: Dismal abundance (User Rating: 1 )
by Shnyzz on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 09:39:05 PM AEST
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Dismal is a very appropriate title for this one...good though.

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