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Don't Play ME!
Contributed by
o7neves
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Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:59:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I first saw him in front of his house
Who would’ve thought I’d meet him in my house
I bumped into him 3 times on the street
And all 3 times, made my heart skip a beat
He then asked me, if he could take me out
And that’s when I knew, it would happen without a doubt
But there’s been 3 strikes, so now he’s out
And of course now, there’s nothing but doubt
So what am I to do
Cuz I refuse to get blue
Wait, come to think of it
He's no one, he means ****
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o7neves
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2005-01-14 19:59:36]
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Re: Don't Play ME!
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:03:28 PM AEST
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| Wow what a twist....Keep writing....check out my two new ones... |
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Re: Don't Play ME!
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:21:21 PM AEST
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| good write keep it up |
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Re: Don't Play ME!
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:31:12 PM AEST
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| =] most people mean the same thing...very good write. |
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Re: Don't Play ME!
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by arden on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:45:23 PM AEST
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nice twist. love the ending. you tell em lol
great poem.
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Re: Don't Play ME!
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by breny on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:47:37 PM AEST
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great write and a nice lil twist at the end : )
~Bren~ |
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Re: Don't Play ME!
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by CurtisC on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 12:10:17 AM AEST
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nice little ending you got there. Poetry can be a very wonderful way to vent some anger :)
good one.
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Re: Don't Play ME!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:05:15 AM AEST
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| lol...good write. |
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Re: Don't Play ME!
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 04:55:28 AM AEST
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Lmao that was good i like the twist you did in the end. It made the poem more interesting.
Good write,
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Re: Don't Play ME!
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by Dec2three198five on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 05:13:04 AM AEST
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| i'm alittle confused AGAIN. lol |
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Re: Don't Play ME!
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:34:30 PM AEST
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great poem i love it
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