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All Mine
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You are my life, my passion, my fire
You are the one that I desire
In your eyes so dark so full
I see the truth as if a rule
You help me whenever I'm in need
You comfort me when I'm sad
You never show a sign of greed
to calm me when I'm mad
When apart I am broken
Together we are strong
My love for you only grows with time
Its you for whom I long
You always know the right words to say
To make me feel like I'm all yours
After you leave to go back home
I can't stand to close the doors
Watching you walk away from me
Leaves me wanting more
My thoughts of you leaving me
Leaves my heart tore
It's like looking through glass
our love is so pure like a song
as our hearts beat together as one
I realize it's you for whom I long
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PsychoticDreamz
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2002-12-05 09:30:00]
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Re: All Mine
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by OreO on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 10:26:41 AM AEST
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This is beautiful....i hope this person see's this....it's a beautiful expression of how you feel for them....thanks for sharing this one it's breathtaking...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: All Mine
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by springchic1979 on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 10:29:11 AM AEST
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That was a very sweet and loving poem, PsychoticDreamz. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Re: All Mine
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 07:44:37 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful! It's very much how I feel about my boyfriend, and I must say, I just adore the line "You always know the right words to say to make me feel like I'm all yours". I love that! I can totally identify with this, coz I don't get to see my love very often, so every time I have to leave him, I'm left wanting more, just like you said! I love every word of this!
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Re: All Mine
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by tier on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 06:39:07 PM AEST
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| i know that feeling very well writen.... |
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