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Tennessee Dawn
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Another lonely Tennessee dawn is breaking,
And my soul, alone, is aching,
Tired, confused, lost, dazed,
From the choices I'll make, the choices I've made,
Standing on the brink of a brand new adventure,
My own life I'm trying to capture,
Staying up thinking half the night,
Looking for answers always trying to fight
Me away, Always balking as I search for them,
And in the dim,
Gray morning, still as lost as ever,
Wondering what this dawn means to my forever,
And golden glory reaches the window sill
At which I sit, as the light kills
The last of the lonely night.
And the pinks and oranges and golden sun in the sky
Brings just one last sigh,
And then I turn, no more night to try to absolve the pain,
Another Tennessee dawn has broken, and I alone am in pain.
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ginsdance
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2002-12-05 09:00:00]
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Re: Tennessee Dawn
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by OreO on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 10:20:09 AM AEST
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The last part of this poem is so sad.....where it says an i alone am in pain, after all that beautiful vision....thanks for sharing this one it's a beautiful write...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: Tennessee Dawn
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by springchic1979 on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 10:32:45 AM AEST
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This poem is sad but well written. It had beautiful imagery and I could picture the Tennessee Sunrise as if I were there.
Beautiful :)
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Re: Tennessee Dawn
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 11:03:48 PM AEST
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| a moment of mournful within' exquisite beauty... lovely write |
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