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Behold the Wise Captain
Contributed by
scott
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Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 06:12:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Behold, the Wise Captain, who has no regrets!!
Who never shows pain, but never forgets,
Who through a broken heart remains serene,
Though beneath it all, there's another scene,
His ship tossed about on a tempest sea
Battered and broken, but nonetheless free.
He will seek the safe harbor of a dear friend
And there he will dock and let the ship mend
......And then boldly go out to sea once again.
And once more set sail upon love"s winds...
Copyright ©
scott
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2005-01-14 18:12:39]
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Re: Behold the Wise Captain
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 06:17:49 PM AEST
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| I don't find anything cryptic about this...I enjoyed it much, very good write! |
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Re: Behold the Wise Captain
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by Gigi_15 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 06:36:21 PM AEST
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| Hey hon this is a great write I love ur poem..the way it rhymes I like it a lot! I hope I see more great work from you! |
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Re: Behold the Wise Captain
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 06:43:33 PM AEST
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Great poem.
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Re: Behold the Wise Captain
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 03:55:11 PM AEST
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I really liked this write. It lifted my spirits and I could smell the salt of the seas and imigine a warm Newfie lover home again.
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