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A Slaves Dream
Contributed by
TekaBoo
on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 04:10:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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He had a dream
About when he was free
But he’s a slave now
And now he’s wondering how
How once he was an African
But now they hardly consider him a man
Sounds to me more like a nightmare
A nightmare he just can’t bare
But wait
Time goes on
On and on
He is now finally free
Free from slavery
Where he’s in heaven now
Watching his family
Copyright ©
TekaBoo
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2005-01-14 16:10:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Slaves Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by TekaBoo on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 04:42:59 PM AEST (User
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HEY PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS POEM CAUSE I AM ONLY 16 AND I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW HOW PEOPLE THINK I'M DOING |
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Re: A Slaves Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 05:37:07 PM AEST (User
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I think the poetry is fine.. but I would like to know..do you really think that anglo america really considers that you are barely a man..and the only way you will be really free is in heaven? Because I am as white as a ..well white LOL and if you are black I .. well you are as free as me.. in my eyes anyway.. maybe more free.. |
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Re: A Slaves Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:21:13 PM AEST (User
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I would comment here however I live in Georgia so my comment would come off as a slur in some way..However rest assured even though I did not care for this at all..I hate the majority of poems here. |
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