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tonight
Contributed by
silverpoppy
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Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:46:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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slowly he approches me
my heart begins to flutter
he does not have to touch me
to see my pleasurable shutter
my body pressed to his
gently he caresses
he speads my hair across the pillow
while softly he confesses
'you are my one and only,
my love, my sweet, my all'
'i love you ,too, my handsome one'
and then we'd said it all
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silverpoppy
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2005-01-14 15:46:07]
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Re: tonight
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 04:02:17 PM AEST
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| Sweetly sort of bordering on erotic. Nice write! Cheers! |
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Re: tonight
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 04:31:09 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
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Re: tonight
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 05:05:39 PM AEST
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| This is sooo beautiful. |
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Re: tonight
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 06:35:40 PM AEST
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| I love it... great writing here. |
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