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Cloud
Contributed by
EverlastingDawn
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Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 02:19:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I have a cloud
Hanging over my head
Raining pouring
Completely drenching me
It won’t go away
A constant reminder
I wasn’t supposed to
I did bad very bad
So now and forever
A cloud’s my best friend
Copyright ©
EverlastingDawn
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2005-01-14 14:19:23]
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Re: Cloud
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by TaintedSoul on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 02:47:06 PM AEST
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Here's an umbrella, kitty ears and all, for ya. Those little black clouds are obnoxious. Seems there be a lot of those running rampant these days.
peace
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Re: Cloud
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by Rhymingron on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:35:19 PM AEST
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| Good poem, but remember that clouds don't last forever. |
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Re: Cloud
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by lovingkk05 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:43:40 PM AEST
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| Good write. IT's kind of like the cloud is guilt. Am I right? |
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Re: Cloud
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 04:01:26 PM AEST
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| Aw. I've had those feelings too. Good expression of feeling punished. Blessings. |
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Re: Cloud
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by breny on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 05:00:17 PM AEST
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guilt is often the worst punishment you can get......i know from experience
~Brenna~ |
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