|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The race
Contributed by
jace
on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 01:13:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
And the rode was hard and cold
But in the end I evaded the mold
of drop outs and losers
I will never give up
not even for you
I'll recieve the cup
I'll be one of the few
As I go
remember that I'll miss you
My love I will show
This emotion somehow is new
But now I must run the race of life
And some how exaustion starts from the start
When I win I'll ask you to be my wife
And give you my ever thumping accelerated heart
Will you need me now
as that line comes so fast
And show me how
As I will dwell on the past
And sweat will drip from these pores
as I run this race for the ever dull gold cup
I can dee the wite banner and my hope sores
And as my heart beats to the ryrthem I chant never give up
And you may not want me
But I can't give up trying
Maybe there will be something new to see
As I near the finish line I cant help from dying
My old tired ticker has about had it
and I have to push even if I end up on the ground
As i run forwarde I can feel my heart hit
The inward wall of my chest I can hear the sound
But even if I don't make it I will know
I did my best and then some
And i have exausted my abillity to show
that I will still be there for you winter come
And I lay on the pavement iches from the line
slick from presperation and tears
your face looked fine
no emotion was shone
So i ran for myself
I got up and gave it my all
And that trophy I did win for my shelf
even if I did loose the girl that fall
Copyright ©
jace
... [
2005-01-14 13:13:41]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The race
(User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:44:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| win some..win some..LOL ..you won even though you lost.. |
|
|
Re: The race
(User Rating: 1 )
by foxxylady852 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:31:57 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I think this poem is amazing. Its really something, I loved reading it. I'm glad you're doing this in best interest for yourself and not this girl. Best wishes.
Leigh |
|
|
Re: The race
(User Rating: 1 )
by jace on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:49:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I appreciate all your comments..
I once again appologize for the spelling errors
I just dont think weel gramaticly when
i am flowing |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
