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Blank line
Contributed by
jace
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Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 01:12:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Poised in front of this bright computer screen
I don't know what to write
Somehow I can't express just how much I feel for you
and all the cheasy pick up lines in the world could never bridge that gap
the whole were you don't see what I see and some how you can smile
that fact that you are elatedly happy all the time worries me
I truly don't think you even missed me when I pulled away.
I watch you from a distance and I am the only one hurting
I am a addic and I didn't even know it the abscence of you
is paining me and I feel the withdrawls starting to get me down
do you rember me do you think of me
when your alone and there is no one to distract you
do you think of me in a ever so suttle way
does my name bring a smile to your face or is it
just me that is addicted in this relationship
or was ever a relationship?
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jace
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2005-01-14 13:12:27]
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Re: Blank line
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by lovingkk05 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:45:54 PM AEST
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WOW. You can really feel how you feel for this person in this poem. IS it real like a real experience if it is and you need someone to talk to I am here.
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Re: Blank line
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by Jezabel on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:35:05 PM AEST
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| expressive. nice write luv. |
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