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Silver
Contributed by
lovingkk05
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Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:16:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In just one night you let me know,
The reasons you won't let me go.
I told you it was time for me to leave,
You grabbed my hand and moved your eyes away from me.
You started to mutter and gave my hand a good hard squeeze,
I don't know how to feel about why you don't want me to leave.
Three weeks before you tie the knot,
You want to screw up my head by telling me you care for me alot.
After I told you long ago how I feel,
You tell me tonight as if it's no big deal.
You tell me that you're confused and don't know what to do,
You love her but you love me too.
So you've known her longer,
So wouldn't that mean your feelings for her should be stronger?
But wait there not their the same,
Isn't that odd you care for me as much as what's her name?
I'm not going to tell you what to do,
I'm not going to sit around and wait for you.
There will be no reason too,
The game is over and once again I lose.
It all started when you said I love you,
If you thought that was hard wait there's more we have to go through.
Wait until you come with her,
IT's going to be awakward that's for damn sure.
But I will say this one last thing before all is said and done,
I am hurt and confused and for once I am not the only one.
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lovingkk05
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2005-01-14 11:16:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Silver
(User Rating: 1 ) by Loyalist on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:18:49 AM AEST (User
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Well aint that some stuff!?
This is why I cruise around the least read poems. I sometimes find a gem!
It's funny how this person you are writing of is living in some movie instead of being a little more cautious with others feelings.
I hope I am not over stepping my bounds by writing that. It was such a moving peice I had to comment on the content.
All in all good writing voice in there. Developing more of a flow would've blown my mind. Still, no knock on you for this great piece of poesy.
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