Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 16:23:47 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Silver

Contributed by lovingkk05 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:16:17 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

In just one night you let me know,
The reasons you won't let me go.
I told you it was time for me to leave,
You grabbed my hand and moved your eyes away from me.
You started to mutter and gave my hand a good hard squeeze,
I don't know how to feel about why you don't want me to leave.
Three weeks before you tie the knot,
You want to screw up my head by telling me you care for me alot.
After I told you long ago how I feel,
You tell me tonight as if it's no big deal.
You tell me that you're confused and don't know what to do,
You love her but you love me too.
So you've known her longer,
So wouldn't that mean your feelings for her should be stronger?
But wait there not their the same,
Isn't that odd you care for me as much as what's her name?
I'm not going to tell you what to do,
I'm not going to sit around and wait for you.
There will be no reason too,
The game is over and once again I lose.
It all started when you said I love you,
If you thought that was hard wait there's more we have to go through.
Wait until you come with her,
IT's going to be awakward that's for damn sure.
But I will say this one last thing before all is said and done,
I am hurt and confused and for once I am not the only one.

Copyright © lovingkk05 ... [ 2005-01-14 11:16:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Silver (User Rating: 1 )
by Loyalist on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:18:49 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Well aint that some stuff!?

This is why I cruise around the least read poems. I sometimes find a gem!

It's funny how this person you are writing of is living in some movie instead of being a little more cautious with others feelings.

I hope I am not over stepping my bounds by writing that. It was such a moving peice I had to comment on the content.

All in all good writing voice in there. Developing more of a flow would've blown my mind. Still, no knock on you for this great piece of poesy.

Loyalist

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com