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The Enemy in Me
Contributed by
kratur
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Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:27:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I can dodge bullets but I’ll still shoot myself in the foot
The worst effort from You would be the best I ever could
Every day I’m sucked dry by the world You made
The more I concentrate I just see the world’s beauty fade
Why do I still pray to You if You spit when You talk?
Get out of my heart—there’s the door, now take a walk
Life is just too short for me to carry my cross every day
Why do You show me the road when it’s impossible anyway?
**** You because I love You
**** You because You love me too
Reach back and feel the wetness in Your anus
Hello God, all that cream is my love for Your Highness
You say You died for me up on that cross
But I don’t believe in forgiveness and I think that all salvation is lost
For You made us grotesque creatures in Your own likeness
And it was for Your sins alone that Your flesh was hung on the harness
Life without You was so great that I wondered why I ever wanted You at all
But that was before I drained myself of happiness and hit a wall
Please come back and I promise I will hold You in my heart like gold
Oh God please don’t forsake me because these demons’ hands are so cold
Copyright ©
kratur
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2005-01-14 10:27:03]
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Re: The Enemy in Me
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by pixie on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:36:43 AM AEST
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very dark and deep, I will miss your writes as I am off on holiday tomorrow, but I will be back to read some more from you in 2 weeks
great poem,
pix xx |
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Re: The Enemy in Me
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 01:59:32 PM AEST
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That is dark and deep and i kinda feel sorry for you.your writes are so full of hate towards jesus and it really saddens me to see that.anyways your piece is very well written .
good write. take care. |
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Re: The Enemy in Me
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:45:00 PM AEST
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| Do you believe in God? This one confuses me as compared to some of your other writes, which by the way I quite enjoy reading. Much peace |
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