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My Keeping Room
Contributed by
Dot
on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 05:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Twilight hour approaches;
gently brushing aside the day.
'Tis time to light the candles;
unfinished tasks are tucked away.
I've kindled the logs in the fireplace;
its cozy warmth draws me nigh.
There's my red velvet chair,
faded and warm;
if you listen, you'll hear my soft sigh.
I've closed out the world;
drawn the drapes to the sill,
then I fastened the shutters;
snuffing out autumn's chill.
Tears fall down my face,
as I fetch out my memories;
even those that have torn me apart.
Sad, sweet memories tucked inside of;
my precious keeping room; my heart.
Copyright ©
Dot
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2002-12-05 05:20:00]
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Re: My Keeping Room
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:34:16 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful....it's sad but very beautiful....it brought tears to my eyes because i sit in my own room like this and do this very thing almost everyday....thanks for sharing this one it really hit home with me...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: My Keeping Room
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by Dot on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 02:21:06 PM AEST
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| Thank you very much, sandwich cookie. Thank you for reading my new poem. I love winter for one reason that no matter what may lie outside my door, I can feel safe and snug inside. I love being alone with my thoughts and I don't mind a raging blizzard outside. In fact, it's inspiring to me. I love your comments. Dot |
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Re: My Keeping Room
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by Ronald on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:05:19 PM AEST
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| Ahhh.... Very nostalgic...... Good write here! :-) |
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Re: My Keeping Room
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by Dot on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 10:37:12 AM AEST
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| Thanks very much for reading my poem. Dot |
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