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Temptation
Contributed by
humboldtsweetie33
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 10:49:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the ones who know her most say shes beautiful,
enchanting and glamerous
an inspiration to us all
as perfect as can be in life
so plain and so simple
yet sophisticated and complex
has a friendly and enticing awe about her
calm and quiet at first glance
some who know her fairly well have a love-hate relationship
with this glamour-whore of a creature
then they want her,
she is their best friend
and is there to help and guide to the next step
and final move
the hate part of the relationship however,
comes after a failure
"I will never trust her again" or
"she did nothing for me"
They are cry
most are not strong enough
and she comes back in bigger, stronger waves
The ones who want nothing to do with her are smart.
they have figured out a way to break free from this enchantress
and look on the bright side of life
they see her as "scary"
or the "easy" way out of a situation
but me, I see her as an epidemic
she moves from one person to the next in a neat and orderly fashion
much like the prostitutes of today
she is easy
sometimes she makes a person finally able to stop all of their hurting
for the times she doesnt succeed in her task,
she makes life a living hell
but she has managed to do neither in my life
but I fear when she emerges again from the shadows
she will succeed in her job as temptress
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Re: Temptation
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by humboldthunny17 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 10:54:35 PM AEST
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| maddy, thats really sad. what can i doo../? |
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Re: Temptation
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by silverpoppy on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 01:12:33 AM AEST
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| i know how you feel about those 1% body fat, i-wonder-how-much-make-up-i can-put-on-before-i-become-top-heavy girls. i feel the same way. good poem. |
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Re: Temptation
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by wolfman on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 01:51:46 PM AEST
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yes we all know those types of "individuals" and yes it is a plight on this world today but some of them cant help it they dont know any better but there ar those whoi do ansd they still do what they do because it gites them what they want and those are the ones that I fear the most.
this was a very good write, I havent hasd to much contact with those types but I see enough to make my own conclusion about what they have in mind. this is a very infomative peace and it will help others see what they havent before. read you later
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