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Blue Eyes Blacklight Crucifix
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:05:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am
head in hands…
See these blue eyes?
((chasms))
Every time I talk to you I feel so good
I feel like crying…
See these blue eyes?
Heat and prickling and OH GOD!!!
these tears now
my chest is heaving
((they will never come))
And I am in darkness
sitting surrounded
by flickering flame
dying and death
is me.
And every time
I watch your back turn
your hips rock, rock, rock
as you walk away, the
Click
Click
Click
of heels of
that telephone receiver
that is not MY telephone receiver
that is falling
lifelessly
to the floor.
Having never felt so full
my heart has never felt so empty.
And so my Apocalypse is final
Now and
Never can I
tear and twist
my lifeless body from your arms and
i can’t
leave you
a part of me.
Listen, my spine is crook’d
My back is hunched
my tears
are
slowly
trickling
past silence iced by means of agony
And you will envision, as I am at this very moment:
A crystal blue sky
wind-swept fields of rippling grass
a cliff and me.
tumbling, soaring
into this ravine,
straight into,
down plummeting.
And at that climactic moment
of impact, penetration,
My heart, my life
will tear spurtingly open,
will no longer exist
for you.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2005-01-13 20:05:42]
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Re: Blue Eyes Blacklight Crucifix
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:31:56 PM AEST
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| this is great and very heartbreaking. i love the orginial style of ur poem.....love it |
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Re: Blue Eyes Blacklight Crucifix
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:13:47 PM AEST
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| i agree with rach. interesting format that presented itself well. powerful ending. and good message. |
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Re: Blue Eyes Blacklight Crucifix
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 05:18:46 AM AEST
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| wow man this is awesome!!!!!!!!!! well done!!!!!!!! |
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