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My Black Winter
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:21:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Snow is falling all around
Intrapping us in our own little world
Your arms embracing me
Holding on to the moment
We are lost. Far from reality
Moving in a dream
We dance to the music only we can hear
The snow crunching under our feet
Our moment in time is gone
With a shudder running through the air
You fall to the ground
Blood staining the perfect snow
Our perfect world was shattered in a flash of a gun
My world stopped turning
My heart stopped beating
My life comes crashing down
Turning my bright and perfect Winter
In to a black one
I'm all alone now
The tears freezing on my cheeks
I've lost you to
My Black Winter
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2005-01-13 18:21:36]
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Re: My Black Winter
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 07:50:36 PM AEST
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| vERY GOOD AND STRONG WRITE HERE |
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Re: My Black Winter
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:41:19 PM AEST
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| i agree with patrick. this reminds me of russias, general winter. i think the germans have suffered that general more than a real person. |
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Re: My Black Winter
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by wolfman on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 01:37:02 PM AEST
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this is a very sad poem it portrays alot of emotion.
I do like this one a lot the topice dosent seem to fit though ( mabey a sad one would have been better)
it was very thought provoking and the imagery was very good. great write read you soon.
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