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Wishing...
Contributed by
doodley_5
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:15:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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lately i've been wishing i had one desire
something that would make me never want another
something that would make it so that nothing matters
all would be clear then.
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Re: Wishing...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:18:05 PM AEST
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| heh. good luck with that! Anyway, this is a nice short self-struggle write. Good job. |
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Re: Wishing...
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by afterdark on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 04:31:27 PM AEST
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| The day you realize that wishes do not come true and you will die one day..Is the day you are no longer a child..Wishes belong in fairy tales. |
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Re: Wishing...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 08:42:36 AM AEST
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short and sweet
great write
I hope you find what your wishing for, hoping for, looking for, living for
~Bethani~ |
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