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Excuses
Contributed by
breny
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:23:49 PM in AEST
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I have heard all the excuses
that there are in the book
there isn't one known
that i happened to overlook
"I lost track of time"
"Sorry I forgot"
I'm ready for it all
what else you got?
Just tell me the truth
about where you've been
"I was at home reading"
oh here we go again!
Copyright ©
breny
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2005-01-13 17:23:49]
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Re: Excuses
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:42:14 PM AEST
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| Yeah! It came out good! Nice write! |
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Re: Excuses
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:23:34 AM AEST
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Tells like it is, ok now u have nailed it, stay with it,
straight from the heart, has a nice flow 2 it also, like
the way u dipict what needed 2 be said . . .
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Re: Excuses
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by michelled43 on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 06:59:05 PM AEST
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great write.....i love the way you expressed yourself in this one......it is so real and im sure so many people relate to it.
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