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Moonlit Night
Contributed by
StarryNightsIV
on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:11:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Starry skies
Moonlit light
Drawn into
alluring night
Hint of darkness
Shrouded mystery
Unknown secrets
There’s no key
Unanswered questions
Puzzled mind
Thoughts just fade
Answers to find
Lost within
Endless space
Starry sky
Is my place
Sense of tranquility
Form of escape
Already dawn’s
Begun to shape
Bid farewell to
Starry skies
Returning to
life of lies
Copyright ©
StarryNightsIV
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2005-01-13 17:11:39]
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by pixie on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:58:01 PM AEST
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excellent flow, great poem
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by girltranscended on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:15:55 PM AEST
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i agree - and really liked this style - you did a great job at keeping the whole piece going.
favorite lines were:
Sense of tranquility
Form of escape
Already dawn’s
Begun to shape
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by wolfman on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:30:23 PM AEST
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yes I to have felt similer emotions when I want to be alone but the company of friends is something that everyone need even if they dont want it.
very good, I did enjoy reading this, it realy hit home with me, but just know that its not always bad, just relay on your good friends and they will help you get through. I liked the flow and the rhyming was good as well. read you later.
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by Sexygirl on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 03:39:53 PM AEST
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| That's a nice little write but a good one..take care |
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