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Sultry Dreams
Contributed by
springchic1979
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Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Though miles apart you rule my heart,
No one else will ever do.
I've made it plain-- to try is vain.
I have eyes for only you.
Every night you hold me tight
If not here then in my mind
The image I see so vividly
Are our bodies intertwined
Erotic streams of soft moonbeams
Caress my satiny skin.
Completely bare I am aware
Of the throbbing deep within.
I recollect and can project
Your body, your touch, your face;
Closing my eyes I fantasize
Being held in your embrace.
A cogent urge makes me converge
Your phantom with fantasy.
On lonely nights I take delights
In my sensuality.
Tremors begin-- the fire within
Sends small shivers up my spine.
Fervent desire makes me perspire
As I feel your touch through mine.
You trace your lips across my hips
I quiver beneath your kiss
Easing suspense my muscles tense
And I welcome Love's Abyss.
Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©2002 Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©
springchic1979
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by Foo on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 07:19:15 AM AEST
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Hey Spring! I told you i'd keep my eyes peeled for this one.Great write babe.This sent quite a few emotions through me.Im going for a second read :) Keep at it
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by OreO on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:11:43 AM AEST
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This is a good write, is this the one they edited???? If it is then i see nothing that needed to edit and obviously neither did mick lol...this is a beautiful write....thanks for sharing it...Keep em' coming..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by springchic1979 on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:28:55 AM AEST
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Oreo thanks for the compliment. I am glad you liked it. :)
YPDC has not edited anything I have written yet...that was a DIFFERENT site I was complaining about in the forums...NOT this site. (I went back and tried to explain it a little better in my second post...and I hope that helps to clear it up a bit.)
For the record I have not had a problem with YPDC. I believe that YPDC is a clean and well kept community and I am glad to be a part of it.
Yvonne |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by springchic1979 on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:31:59 AM AEST
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Hehe thanks for the compliment, Foo! I am glad you enjoyed it.
*blush*
Yvonne |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by springchic1979 on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:35:40 AM AEST
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whoops I misread what you typed the first time. I think what you were asking was if the OTHER site edited this poem as well, right?
IF that is what you were asking the answer is-- no they did not. This poem was created after I left the other site so they never had a chance to edit it.
Yvonne |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 08:04:28 PM AEST
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This is awesome! I very much enjoyed it. "Love's Abyss" - I like that. ;)
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by springchic1979 on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 11:24:11 AM AEST
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Thank you very much MoonlitAngel, I am glad you enjoyed it! :)
Yvonne |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by Sarah22 on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 10:59:00 PM AEST
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this poem
was so very
amazing to read . |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by springchic1979 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 06:09:32 PM AEST
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Thank you for the compliment, Sarah22 :)
Yvonne |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 11:28:50 PM AEST
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| wonderful poem :*). |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by springchic1979 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 10:59:06 AM AEST
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Thank you Sarah22 I am glad you enjoyed it!
Yvonne |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:40:48 PM AEST
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| beautifully passionate... ahhhh love & hugs to you and yours, always nessa |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by wolfflow on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:59:41 PM AEST
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| love this, wonderful poem, full of natural and honest desires, and really well written, honest expression is always leads to creative beauty |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by springchic1979 on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:14:03 PM AEST
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Thanks Nessa, I was challenged to write something....'different'....so I did. To my surprise it has gotten better responses then I thought it would. Thanks for sharing yours!
Much love,
Yvonne |
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Re: Sultry Dreams
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by springchic1979 on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:16:40 PM AEST
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Thank you very much for your kind words Wolfflow. I am glad you liked the poem :)
Yvonne |
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