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*My Daddy*
Contributed by
Melly2
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 04:05:29 PM in AEST
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I picked my phone up to call my Dad,
Then I thought a thought that was rather sad.
It wasnt the fact that he wasnt near,
But that fact that he's not even here.
I didnt even get to say goodbye,
That was the thought that brought a tear apon my eye.
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Melly2
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2005-01-13 16:05:29]
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Re: *My Daddy*
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by neoneo on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 04:02:03 PM AEST
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sometimes you just have to try hard on those kid of things
really good write |
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Re: *My Daddy*
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 02:04:53 PM AEST
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short, yet still full of emotion and pain.
awesome write
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Re: *My Daddy*
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by Drapes on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:10:58 PM AEST
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short but sooo deep. i have the same feelings with my grandma. i go to call her and then remember that i can never do that again. best wishes to you. great write!
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