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Over You!
Contributed by
o7neves
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:25:42 PM in AEST
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You hurt me through and through
And all I thought was that I was gonna stay blue
But boy was I wrong
Who knew that I’d be so strong?
I’ve learned how to move on
And now I’m glad that you’re gone
I started anew
And no longer so blue
I’ve met someone else
And he’ll put me to the test
I know I will pass
So you can kiss my @$$!
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o7neves
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2005-01-13 13:25:42]
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Re: Over You!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:17:57 PM AEST
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| Heh... Angry, but coming from a strong place. Interesting write. Cheers! |
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Re: Over You!
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by pixie on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:58:39 PM AEST
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a good show of anger here, good poem *hugs*
pix xx |
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Re: Over You!
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:33:21 PM AEST
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you show ur anger really well. good write.
luv,
sue |
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Re: Over You!
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by CurtisC on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:00:16 PM AEST
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i got a kick outta the ending, that was good :)
i'm glad you didn't let yourself get down in a hole, its good to see someone with some confidence in themself. keep em comin |
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Re: Over You!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:03:40 AM AEST
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Good write. :-)
I can really sense your anger in this write.
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Re: Over You!
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by Dec2three198five on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:45:32 PM AEST
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| good poem. I'm happy for you that you left whoever you left and found yourself another one. It's good how you stayed strong. 33 |
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