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No more than a friend No less than a Lover
Contributed by
jace
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:09:43 PM in AEST
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I want to thank you for being all I had
You were my life,force and blood
Am I exagerating just a tad
Sedative,superlative, super infactuative and so
I realy,truly, sadly don't think you know
I can not stop myself from plying for you
I'm worried that you'll find out
I truly dont know what to do
All this inside revelled in doubt
I am not trying to woo you towards me
I know my imaturity is all you see
I am not asking for a significant other
I just want you to know your more than
a friend no less than a lover
Copyright ©
jace
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2005-01-13 12:09:43]
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Re: No more than a friend No less than a Lover
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:17:09 PM AEST
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| Interesting. Sometimes I think we're all looking for valentines like this. What matters is... whether your object of affection can be *trusted* with your feelings whether or not they are returned. Oh.... scratch that... that's advice, which you aren't asking for. Silly me. Well anyway, nice write! |
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Re: No more than a friend No less than a Lover
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:03:45 PM AEST
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| Some things..like this word..infactuative ..I looked up and didn't find? So..I'm curious.. but..now this last stanza I want to steal..or better yet if someone would send it to me..that'd be super!!!!!! |
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Re: No more than a friend No less than a Lover
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by wolfman on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:43:24 PM AEST
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so many times these fellings have been felt and still so little we know about them. they cut through the soul or just brush the surface of our skin.
these are fellings that i have felt many times but only for one yeat I still cant bring myself to tell them to her, dont fell alone there arte many out there that are going through the same thing. be strong God bless. a very good poem
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Re: No more than a friend No less than a Lover
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by prozac_memory on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:59:22 PM AEST
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another good poem. i love the last two lines.
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Re: No more than a friend No less than a Lover
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by givingin on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:31:13 AM AEST
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This poem really touched me when I read it.....
it's very powerful, I feel this way for one of my friends and they will NEVER know............
THNX for writing this :)
GREAT WRITE
*~givingin~* |
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Re: No more than a friend No less than a Lover
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by Beniam on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 01:18:25 AM AEST
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| Yes, indeed a great write Jace. |
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