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The One
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:47:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You are the one who I long to kiss,
Yours is the only heart beat that I miss,
You’re the only one holding onto my hand,
With you my one & only I want to stand.
Love was once to me a four letter word,
That so many a past boyfriend has heard,
I threw the word around just like a ball,
Never before had I really heard love call.
That was until I found my way to you,
Since we first met my love grew & grew,
It blossomed into something with such beauty,
A love like ours is so ripe & so fruity.
I believe that our love can conquer a mountain,
As long as it flourishes in our fountain,
Drinking & growing ever stronger,
As the days grow brighter & slowly longer.
There’s only room in my heart for one,
Only one man can bring out my summer sun,
That man who with I have been truly blessed,
I had found love at long last who’d ever have guessed?
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2005-01-13 11:47:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:00:20 PM AEST (User
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I threw the word around just like a ball,
I really like that line because it's so true of everyone..we all throw that word around like a ball..good job pix.. |
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Re: The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by 307luvs09 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:00:57 PM AEST (User
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this was so straight I had to send it to my man. With your copy write of course. keep up the good work, heck maybe i won't have to write anymore you can just speak it for me. Tell it like it T I is.....! How's it going today? |
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Re: The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by little_genna on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:05:48 PM AEST (User
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Krissie.......
......wow......
This actually made me feel slightly warm inside
......a feeling i havent had in a couple of months.....
........your writing is getting better every time i read one of your poems.........
*hugs*
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Re: The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dri on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:38:02 PM AEST (User
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this is really sweet. |
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Re: The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:11:58 PM AEST (User
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hmm nice and sweet pixie .you have great talent in your writing. |
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Re: The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 04:22:32 PM AEST (User
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This was just WoW...It must feel real good to feel that way bout someone. I really liked this poem!! keep it up! TD |
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Re: The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by pleasure_is_pain103 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:18:24 PM AEST (User
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i wish i could all in love- that poem really makes a person want it...very sweet |
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Re: The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by Red_October on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 04:03:38 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful, pixie. Simple and free. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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