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My Redemption
Contributed by
AllSmiles
on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:02:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As I raise the knife up to my face
I stare into the reflection that is cast
I used to know the figure upon it
But as I gaze into its soul I no longer see hopes and dreams
Darkness and emptiness is all that remains
As I tilt the blade I see the figures lips
A smirk comes upon them
A smirk not from happiness
But a smirk of insanity
The thought of the blade brushing against the skin as it peels back brings laughter
I gently press the blade against my throat, eyes closed tightly from the pain
I raise the blade back to my face and stare at the blood that now stains it
As the blood drips down the blade I imagine the freedom that it may bring
Will anyone truly miss me if I end?
Will anyone notice that I am gone?
Those questions no longer matter; I only care for my redemption
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AllSmiles
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2005-01-13 11:02:41]
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Re: My Redemption
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by williamdye on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:36:23 AM AEST
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| I love this writing, we have alot in common. |
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Re: My Redemption
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:08:43 PM AEST
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| I was watching the making of some movie..and they showed the actor using the blade for a mirror..I'm thinking it might be Johnnie Depp..but I'm probably wrong.. |
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Re: My Redemption
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:25:35 PM AEST
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| Good write doll..I really hate alot of these type poems but this one was very good |
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Re: My Redemption
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:27:49 PM AEST
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| why cant you redeem yourself living? |
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