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Impatience
Contributed by
Jezabel
on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:34:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tumbling
In strange ways
Feverish
In hungry lips
Shoulders back
I rise to meet
Your chest.
Arms surround
Total acceptance
Of falling.
Pleasure
Drips from you
Impatiently.
Pounded wisdom
Into me
Boundless joy
Comforts me
In private heaven
Minds meet hearts.
I wake up
Damp from dreams.
Copyright ©
Jezabel
... [
2005-01-13 08:34:53]
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Re: Impatience
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by 307luvs09 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:49:09 AM AEST
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| that's what i'm talking about. this is a very errotic poem. It had me on pins and needles. keep it up. I'm going to read some more of your stuff. |
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Re: Impatience
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by sean88 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:50:45 AM AEST
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Very nice poem! Myb "someday" arrive soon for you ;) lol
love sean xxx |
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Re: Impatience
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by SilmorilM on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 04:41:52 AM AEST
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| Inspired write, I really loved it! Keep up the good work :-) |
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