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Failed Suicide
Contributed by
nomadsoul
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:16:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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It’s 12 midnight
The air is soggy outside
The owl was hooting
Is this an omen?
This eerie feeling is creeping my spine
my knees are so weak
yeah...I'm having a mind blockade
this mind have made up this decision?
whoa... this dejavu...
The time has come
To say goodbye…
These distraught years
These uneventful days
Don’t mean much to me…
Time has come
To take away my life
Time has come
To close this chapter
…But then again…
I’ll wait for a while
I shall not ponder these thoughts!
I have made my mind!!
I am going to DIE TODAY
It’s a good day to DIE
It’s an astrological event in the planetary systems
…. You’re a fool…no…yes…no…yes
be cool, damn it
I think I’ll pop the pill now…
Thirty-six of ‘em…straight shooter
Is there better way to die faster?
An hour passed…
Still I didn’t die
I feel nauseated
I want to puke
My stomach is rollercoasting
Oh god…this wretched feeling has crept upon me
I didn’t die today
Guess I didn’t have the balls to do it…
I think I’ll go a fix a drink, downstairs
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nomadsoul
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2005-01-13 02:16:14]
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Re: Failed Suicide
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by pixie on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:20:51 AM AEST
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a suicide poetry with a happy ending, I am glad you didnt have the balls to do it, I am glad that you chose to live. Expressive write
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Re: Failed Suicide
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by givingin on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:38:47 AM AEST
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I know what you mean,
I don't have the balls either....well...even though I am a girl,.......but you get my point....
But truthfully, life is better than death, if you have one life.... you may want to makwe it count, you only get one chance........
When I reolized that... my life changed.....
for the better....:)
Great write
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Failed Suicide
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by wolfman on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:27:00 PM AEST
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there are lots of contradicting filings when it comes to that point but you always know what to do, even if you do follow through.
this was a wonderful writing poem, I to have been to the edge and back that is why I am here to day. just know that things do get better and you will find a "proper" way to handel your "situations", and we are always here to help. great write please post again
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Re: Failed Suicide
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:29:36 PM AEST
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| im with pixie on this. |
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