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When I'm With You....
Contributed by
mina-1
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 11:45:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I look into your eyes
My heart just flutters
My tongue gets twisted
My words just clutter
Every time we meet
My heart skips a beat
My knees get weak
Cemented firm my feet
When I'm with you
Nothing else exists
Your warm gentle embrace
Your kiss an essence of gist
When I'm in your arms
My heart just melts
The night stirs with passion
As desires of lust are felt
When I'm with you
In your safe haven i shall stay
Living an eternity
Of love until my dying day
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-01-12 23:45:06]
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Re: When I'm With You....
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by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:54:40 AM AEST
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| I liked how this poem flowed and found it to be sooo lovely. Beautiful write! TD |
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Re: When I'm With You....
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by CurtisC on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:29:18 AM AEST
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| this poem rolls off the tongue real well, very nice write :) |
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Re: When I'm With You....
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by pixie on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:22:28 AM AEST
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awww beautiful and soft,
pix xx |
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Re: When I'm With You....
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by jmpy84 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:30:51 PM AEST
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| wonderful write |
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Re: When I'm With You....
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:02:15 AM AEST
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Spoken with the purity and honesty of true child like
innocence, in short, a masterpeice of writting and
display of true emotions . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: When I'm With You....
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by arden on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:14:19 PM AEST
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very sweet poem. very heartful and beautiful.
i very thoroughly enjoyed this . well written.
5 stars
Arden |
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Re: When I'm With You....
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by Sexygirl on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 07:47:46 AM AEST
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Isn't it beautiful to be so in love. Nicely written
take care |
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