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Resurection
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 11:33:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My pen with ink of blood,
writing and spilling,
emptying my heart to empty parchment...
Candelled light, shines my blood on paper.
Bittersweet redemption.
Bitter and twisted resurection.
A small verse, growing inside my head.
A large verse, spiraling out of control.
The more blood on the paper,
The less of me in the words.
Bittersweet redemption...
Bitter and twisted alone in resurection.
The candel burns out...
Parchment is full...
My story I'll tell...
The blood all drained out.
For this bittersweet resurection.
Twisted desire, redeemer.
~signed - yours faithfull forever in death.
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surge_joebot
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2005-01-12 23:33:40]
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Re: Resurection
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:20:25 AM AEST
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Your words are art, within their own context.
This was a symbolical piece, with metaphorical expression.
I truly admire your muses. |
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Re: Resurection
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by TwEeK on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 04:58:57 PM AEST
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"Bittersweet redemption.
Bitter and twisted resurection."
I loved it. Baeutiful. Painful, but beautiful nonetheless.
Great job. |
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Re: Resurection
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 04:05:55 PM AEST
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| this one was amazing. i liked every line and everyword |
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