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A Vampire's Last Pledge
Contributed by
taintedsoul
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:37:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Trickling little droplets of crimson
Tickling down my chin
Drunk of you I have
Taken you deep within
Now your life is mine
For within each drop I consume
Leaves you bleeding profusely
Drenching my senses through and through
Trickling little droplet of crimson
Sweet aching life to wash through me anew
Life giving candy I draw from you
Within each deadly kiss placed upon your neck
Fill me ever more, my love, with your undying soul
Your body grows cold now, within my loving arms
That cradle your dying flesh with lips upon a tender neck
Glassy eyes stare blankly now
At the ceiling that hovers above
So full of stars at midnight
With the moon and her silvery light
Take your dying breath, my dear
For this be your last upon this earth
And twilight beckons you hither
While the sun sets upon your life eternal
2002
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taintedsoul
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2005-01-12 22:37:25]
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Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 11:58:00 PM AEST
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a really good write. I enjoyed reading ur poem
keep writing
cheers,
sue
PS.reminds me of the vampires in the movies |
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Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge
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by Kratur on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:37:17 AM AEST
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its actually pretty weird... i remember reading this poem on your site
*loved that sexy vamp chick pic*
nostalgia is cool
fix the links on your page please soulless!
you have fans you know!! |
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Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:59:14 AM AEST
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Very creative vampire write i really liked it.
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Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge
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by artostuff on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 04:50:16 AM AEST
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I like this, its has a nice melencholy romantic feel to it. Wonderful imagery. I also like the last line,
"While the sun sets upon your life eternal"
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Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge
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by pixie on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:25:14 AM AEST
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I just love vampire writes, I struggle with writitng them, that was amazingly dark and I really loved reading
pix xx |
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Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:04:29 AM AEST
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| Good write they keep me reading |
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Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:35:25 AM AEST
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I love vampires and this was a very good write.. Vampires are awesum!!
~:: christina ::~ good job!! |
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