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A Moment in time
Contributed by
Evilcaf
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:30:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I've dreamt this dream a thousand times before,
everytime I do I want it more.
I lay in your arms, our bodies entwined,
Our hearts beat as if in time.
I feel your warmth, know I'm free from harm.
The need in me for love, goes quietly calm.
As you hold me tighter, in your embrace,
I look up at your sweet face,
you kiss my nose, then my chin
I feel myself , my breath holding in.
As ever so gently, you press, your lips against mine.
I wish I could freeze this moment in time,
This moment to hold ,forever, would be mine
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Evilcaf
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2005-01-12 21:30:59]
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Re: A Moment in time
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:29:14 PM AEST
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That perfect moment caught in a kiss stays with a person for a lifetime. Enjoyed the tenderness here, for you've expressed the intensity we humans feel during such moments.
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Re: A Moment in time
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by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:57:12 AM AEST
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| What a very heartfelt write. I really enjoyed it! TD |
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Re: A Moment in time
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:05:56 AM AEST
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Awe so sweet. I can relate to how you want to freeze the perfect kiss. Great write :)
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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