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Anything Past The Fear
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:04:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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....I get tired of all
the people
mine and their walls
lack of calls
makes me wanna fall
down the the ground
where I'm never to be found
happy having no one around
or anything profound
to remotely astound
me
into the living
for giving
my all
to no one
beyond the fun
illicitly coming undone
edging to run
far away
but never to stay
like my life is delayed
while on display
for the world to see
me
climb the tree
and only believe
I can never retrieve
nor receive
anything
past the fear......
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2005-01-12 21:04:47]
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Re: Anything Past The Fear
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:12:55 AM AEST
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| A truly powerful poem.... I loved it!!!! |
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Re: Anything Past The Fear
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:30:12 AM AEST
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Wow that was really a sad poetic write. A very creative powerfull poem.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Anything Past The Fear
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by artostuff on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 04:37:17 AM AEST
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| I like this. Its a great write. I liked the imagery. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Anything Past The Fear
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:07:14 AM AEST
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You're still writing the same poetry
with width, depth, and meaning.
I'm so glad to be able to read it again!!!!
It always renews my feeling!
I love you
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